All the things i never said

by Mephastophilis   Aug 25, 2004


The very first time I saw you
My whole life change forever
For I had never believed in angels
I had mocked other people and said whatever

The earth paused in its orbit
The first moment I heard you speak
You spoke with ardour and such finesse
You captured my soul and left my knees feeling weak

The day you asked my out
I was rapturous, it was a shock
I tried to be cool
But I was speechless, I couldn’t talk

The very first time your lips blessed mine
I thought I had found heaven, I was so high
The zeal in your kiss sent jolts through my body
It was thrilling; amazing what you could do to me

You’re compassionate, poised and clever
I think I’m going to love for ever and ever
Even if you hurt me or leave me for another
I always remember you, you’re my first love and there will never be another.

Pls comment and vote on what you think of it. Even if its negative- i can take it.

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  • 20 years ago

    by David

    Very well expressed.
    I loved your rhyming scheme, and your flow was great.
    You have a talent for being very descriptive. I love that. You paint a pretty pciture with your words.

  • 20 years ago

    by Leah20

    I really liked it. I can really relate to it at the moment. I love your poetry!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Kevin McNulty

    Hi Molly, this is really great. You have a real way with words, half of them i would never use in a poem coz i barely know what they mean lol
    Well done on the poem, i'll get to read the rest, K

  • 20 years ago

    by mike

    nice one