nice one

Hi Molly, this is really great. You have a real way with words, half of them i would never use in a poem coz i barely know what they mean lol
Well done on the poem, i'll get to read the rest, K

I really liked it. I can really relate to it at the moment. I love your poetry!!!

Very well expressed.
I loved your rhyming scheme, and your flow was great.
You have a talent for being very descriptive. I love that. You paint a pretty pciture with your words.