by Unseen Exposure Aug 25, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You hear her scream, |
by Marta
WOW. Unbelievably good, just simply amazing, I loved the ending, I'm so speechless. Good job and keep it up :0) |
by Shona
hey, i loved that poem, twas great. keep writing :) ...but whats with tha "sorry its not so good" ...why would you write that? you obviously want praise + reussurance and sh-t. anyway, good job |
OMG how can u say htat was bad?! that was pure talent! you are amazing katie! i love yourt work sooo much you have incredible talent :( please keep writing <333 |
Are you kidding? That was such a wonderful poem. Such power woven in the lines, I give it a five. The topic may be sad, but it's a really great peice. Nice job! |
by nikki
and as so many people have said, you should not be sorry, thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem with us. great work. |