thanks for the comments on my poems....yours are great, but when u commented on mine saying i could've dun better or something along those lines i just wanna know outta curiosity what gives u this idea?...
Cool Poem tho!

loved this poem especially the bit: "You hand me another bite, and expect me to chew;
I'm choking...on all your lies." just made me feel something and loved the way it just makes sense. xxx

i really liked this one..especially this part " you say hello i wonder if its true,you hand me another bite and expect me to chew.."

This is great. Reminds me where I am and where I've been. Very heartfelt.