by Brittany Aug 26, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You said we’d be together forever, |
by Bryan
Hey, I thought that was a great poem. I really liked how it all flowed together. You got pretty drastic there in the end, but that is what made the poem so good. I really liked the way you used your words, and was all very smooth. Great job. I loved it. |