Comments : That Positive State of Mind...

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wow Eirisa i truley don't know what to say! It's so sad to know the one you loved left but its so great to see an excellent poem like this! You just express yourself in the best way! I loved this one it was so good!! As your right in your poem i don't know if anyone will understand your situation but I'm trying hard too and to be able to give you the words of comforts and send much hugs...Your doing great with these poems of yours!! GREAT! much love!! ya baby sis! Chelsey~

  • 20 years ago

    by Libby M

    Eirisa,

    My Goodness.... You have spoken to me through your words.. The pain and thoughts are just like mine. Just when we think we have found our place in this life and a special someone to share it with.... we are to never think we are gonna fall... But like you said.. whatever goes up will come down crashing.... My are you right. I know exactly what you meant in this poem. Another beautiful work of art. Good Job.

    Libby