D@mn girl! your talent gets so much better and better everytime i read something new! This one was so beautiful!! I have nothing to say im speechless to know you have someone you feel so strongly about but yet can't see him! That's so sad..I wish i was their to catch all your tears Eirisa cause i ca nonly imagine the pain all this is putting you through! Stay strong girl and keep your head high! Love ya!! ~Chelsey~

This is a touching one. Hate things are this way for you. Keep writing, I'm sure it helps. You done a beautiful job. Take Care

Eirisa your poems touch my heart everytime. No matter what subject they hold I always enjoy reading them. Very heartfelt and beautifully written.

Nicely done!!!

sooooo realistic, you actually in the middle of writing one or what? If so, just put that in an envelope hun, and send that, it's really great.

Funny because i actually was in the middle of a letter Emma and could write it...ended up with this poem :o) I have thought about sending but i feel so uncomfortable sharing my poetry with ppl im close too - thats why i love this site i get the feedback i need, i get it heard but in a sense continue to remain anonymous...i dunno but thanks to you all for your kind words i will return the favour :o) Much Love Eirisa

YOU'RE VERY TALENTED. I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR POEMS AND THIS ONE I FELL IN LOVE WITH.KEEP WEARING THAT HEART ON YOUR SLEEVE,IT HELPS US ALL OUT IN A WAY