Have You Cried My Tears

by Dani Ward   Aug 26, 2004


Have you cried my tears,
have you felt my pain,
has your heart bled like mine,
do you have anything to gain?
i have lost everything,
and there is nothing i can do,
but most importantly,
i have lost you.
do you feel the same,
have you lost everything,
do you care that you lost me,
are you crying, or do you sing?
please won't you answer,
these questions i asked you,
do so as quickly as you can,
do you still want to talk to me, or this won't you do?

i wrote this right after we got back from missouri.

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  • 20 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    That was a pretty good poem, I liked the way you were asking him questions to imply your pain, thats interesting. The rhyming seemed a little forced in the poem, I think thats because the syllables don't match up. Thats just some creative critisim, don't be offended or anything. But good poem, I liked it.
    Love,

    -Blue