by Dani Ward Aug 26, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Have you cried my tears, |
by BaybeBlew
That was a pretty good poem, I liked the way you were asking him questions to imply your pain, thats interesting. The rhyming seemed a little forced in the poem, I think thats because the syllables don't match up. Thats just some creative critisim, don't be offended or anything. But good poem, I liked it. |