Eternal Paradise with Emily

by Seth   Aug 26, 2004


Oh wouldn't it be nice,
to live in an eternal paradise?
A place where time stands still,
you can do what you want at will.
Where the stars at night,
are big and bright.
Where you smile at the moon,
and it smiles back at you.
Where the days are long,
and the night sings its song.
The storm clouds are held at bay,
but I'd throw it all away,
to be with you this day.
But my paradise isn't all that great,
if I can't enjoy it with you.

Dedicated: To Emily

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  • 20 years ago

    by alfie

    oh you commented on my poem, saying it should be better "if i am hell, you are heaven". you're rihgt it makes so much more sense, but i just wrote it quickly. I'll take more care next time, but i appreciate the comment. thanks for takin the time to read it, xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by alfie

    really loved this poem too! i love the way you write them, they are so different. xxx