i really like this poem. but i think it kind of goes downhill as you go along, the first stanza is excellent! but i don't really like the last one. anyways great work.
xnikkix

i dunno, i rekon it is all pretty good, but i do think the last stanza could be adjusted, but i love it! i really love 'stormy weather' i dont know why, it just sounds really cool, you have great talent Jamie, keep up the good work and keep on smiling :)

wow, this poem is exquiste Jamie, though you have some spelling mistakes, but i loved it! like i know i can, and probably so many others can relate, beauitful work, you have pure talent, your work inspires me to conintue writting...thanks for commenting hun <333
-Mortalidaga
xxtakecare4alwaysxxx

Hey I just wanted to thank you for voting and commenting on my poem thee other day...I also wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this poem...You too are a really good writer...You write with words that sometimes even I cannot even think of or even express...I really felt this poem...Keep up the excellent work...Chow 4 Now...JeNnIe

another amazing piece! i really liked the 3rd verse, you will find that inner light im sure!:)beanxx

Great work. You definately have some talent, keep writing.

That was good!!!!!!Keep up the good work.

i think it sux....i ALL went down hill..from the very first word!...n jamie i didnt block u....u jus blocked urself

WOW..I LOVED thsi poem..it is soo beautiful!!!! the way you write is so amazing!!! I love reading your work!!!! ..you rock!!!
much love
elizabeth