by Jacki Aug 27, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The first star I see at night |
by mike
nice poem |
by Just Val
I like it alot! But the not rhyming and then rhyming and then not on and off thing is kind of....confusing. Get what I mean? Not confusing in the sense where I idn't get the poem beacuse I did confusing cause you keep switching the flow of the poem..but otherwise it was great!! |