by Mephastophilis Aug 27, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
I've heard many theories about how and why the world will end |
by Gracie Jo
I really liked this one. you have an awesome talent girl. keep it up and take care! |
Thanks every1 for all the lovely comments. i appreciate them all. to shadowmaker- thanks for the comments, i understood most of it apart from the thing about mosquitoes but thanks a lot again- this was my first draft of the poem and i was tempted to change it and inprove it but i decieded to keep it this way because i wrote it from from my heart and i wrote the first things that came into my mind. I don't want it to be perfect, i like its imperfections, do you get what i mean? nothings perfect anyways, especially not this world. xmollyxx |
by vanessarrr
wow. that was very very very good. beautiful. you'll succeed in life, i say. awesome rhyming and content. you're really a great poet. take care:) |
by julie
That was excellent an i totally agree, our government are a bunch of w*n*e*s. |
hey very nicely done and after reading this poem...it made me think about the world. very nice! |