Hey, I dont know how you feel because i have never los someone close to me before, though i do know people who have passed away, and its such a awful thing to happen, but i guess this what life...
I hope that your doing okay, and that you know his in a better place.
This is a really good poem, and it really creates feeling of what your going through, and i feel for you.. Just remember to stay strong..

Luv Julia

Wow!!! That was SO great but also SOOOO sad!! I'm so sorry to hear about all that!!!! I hope things get better!!! I'm so sorry!!!!
Amy

Oh my...I'm so sorry for your loss! You and your family are in my prayers!! God bless....

Wow, that was an amazing poem but very sad. I am so sorry that you have felt so many losses in your life already but one thign i have learned is that God has a plan and everythign happens for a reason and you know what hunnie, all thses losses are going to make you a much stronger person. I mena even look at your writing, so strong, so emotional, so mcuh talent. I would really aprteciate if someone of your talent could vote or commentnon my poems. I'll take critisism too...but whether my poes are good like yours or not so mcuh, they do coem straight from my heart as i see yours do too and that s what makes them special. Newest ones are memories of pain and complexities unknown. Thanks so mcuh...and remember stay strong, and keep writing.

Luv Jamie

great poem. i'm sorry for your loss, i have lost many close people in my life so i understand how tough it is. it is great that you turned such a horrible thing into such a beautiful poem. excellent job.
xnikkix

such an amazing poem. i'm speechless

I'm really sorry for your loss. God bless, may he rest in peace.

Amazing poem.

I'm sorry for your loss, just know, I feel for you. I know exactly how that feels. I had two of my friends die...car crash and drugs...from the doctor, she was allgergic. My Great-grandmother died December 26th at 2 in the morning, wonderful christamas eh? My Grandpa has cancer and isn't doing to well, he has almost died once. My step-grandpa died when I was about 6. I know it seems young, but I remember everything. My two unborn neices/nephews died, but at least I now have a neice, and a nephew on the way from my other sister. I'm sorry it's as if everyone seems to be leaving you. My father did not die, but the way we are heading, he might as well be. Wonderful poem. Best regards.

amy im scared for you.. you blocked me and told me what you were going to do.. please talk to me..