by JS
great poem. flowed perfectly. keep it up. you are very talented |
by Hope
Very good poem! It was simplistic but unique in a sense that you have described another side of love which other poems i've read have not revovled around. Once again, well done! |
by Kathryn H
Obviously this one is about Jared |
by mheimhei
.,oMG!!i can feel Your poem.,i can relate with it.,;) |