Dear God...

by vanessarrr   Aug 28, 2004


I don't know which path to take...
will You show me the way?
i don't know who i can trust...
won't You tell me today?

i don't know what is right from wrong...
can You show me which one?
i don't why my life is cold...
would You lend me the sun?

i don't know why i'm all alone...
can You give me a friend?
i don't know if i'll win this fight...
will i lose in the end?

i don't know where i'll find my strength...
when will i stop these tears?
i dont know if i'll be with You...
when will i rest in peace?

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  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Oh that was great, its just the prayer I need to make :) You puts it just rigtht, love your work, keep it up. :)

  • 20 years ago

    by JS

    great job. i can really relate to this. keep writing. you have talent!

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    that is excellent iot really youched me, i so know how you feel, its really meaningful, but why all the full stops?

  • 20 years ago

    by Jamie

    Love it and felt so unbelievably lost liek this so many times. Keep writing hunnie...you got what it takes! Jamie

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