Within My Silent Soul!

by Jennifer Fox or Jackson   Aug 28, 2004


Broken windows to my silent soul,
Deep dark secrets that I keep and forever hold,
Pain and fury that I now live and feel,
Dripping blood thats gushes red and real.

Drowning darkness that forms my dreams,
Hate and rage that becomes even more extreme,
Day by day I cry alone,
Giving up, is what my tears have shown.

Heavy-metal music fills my ears,
Its rhythm beats to my uncontrollable tears,
Needle sharp daggers piece through my heart,
Burning anger is what makes me finally fall apart.

Shortening of breath is what I now have,
Fading away quietly has made me glad,
I never wanted to show this side of me,
But with the truth that don't lie, is what you now have to believe.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jamie

    Wow...just wow....so deep and wow, very touchign words hunnie. I agree with WORTHLESS THO, IT WOULD BE EVEN BETTER IF IT WAS LONGER BUT HEY, I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL, SOMETIMES THAT'S JUST ALL YOU FEEL AND IT CAN KILL THE POEM IF U JUST TRY AND STICK WORDS IN THERE THAT DON'T BELONG. So good job. You are very talented....and i was wonderign if you could maybe comment on my two most recent poems, or at least vote, i wrote thewm both last night. Thank you so much for sharing your feelings. Keep writign out those talented words within you.

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