Wow...just wow....so deep and wow, very touchign words hunnie. I agree with WORTHLESS THO, IT WOULD BE EVEN BETTER IF IT WAS LONGER BUT HEY, I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL, SOMETIMES THAT'S JUST ALL YOU FEEL AND IT CAN KILL THE POEM IF U JUST TRY AND STICK WORDS IN THERE THAT DON'T BELONG. So good job. You are very talented....and i was wonderign if you could maybe comment on my two most recent poems, or at least vote, i wrote thewm both last night. Thank you so much for sharing your feelings. Keep writign out those talented words within you.