by Ş∂ņÄħy∂ Aug 28, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
A first time |
by Allen
Nice poem yet again, your words took my mind away, to the fairyland :) That was beautifully written, I loved it. Keep up the good work, and take care :) |
by Mustardhart
I was wondering the choice of that title.. funny how u fuse your imagination and reality all the time, I cant help but look inward.. very creative and beautifully set. I am waiting for more |
by Gary
Nice One... Too good..Keep Writing. |
by Jacki
I really liked it. I didn't expect it to be like it was was when I clicked on it. But i'm so glad I did. I love the ending how he reilzed the women never held his hand, and the rose he gave her was on the floor. Amazing job. |
Oops! Lots of mistakes...Looks like i have to go back to school! I feel so stupid... I promise that next time i will be more careful. |