hmmm..its nice...but i was thinking is this a true story?? im confused...neways i really cant write unless its not really happened ...nice job

That was haunting... the imagery and language are ethereal. Cheers.

Oops! Lots of mistakes...Looks like i have to go back to school! I feel so stupid... I promise that next time i will be more careful.

I really liked it. I didn't expect it to be like it was was when I clicked on it. But i'm so glad I did. I love the ending how he reilzed the women never held his hand, and the rose he gave her was on the floor. Amazing job.

Nice One... Too good..Keep Writing.
But i still wonder do all poets put into words that has happened with them or they are creative ??? You are awesome...

I was wondering the choice of that title.. funny how u fuse your imagination and reality all the time, I cant help but look inward.. very creative and beautifully set. I am waiting for more

Nice poem yet again, your words took my mind away, to the fairyland :) That was beautifully written, I loved it. Keep up the good work, and take care :)