No you poem is good. Trust me ppl think that there poems suck when ppl think that they are good. I hate some of mine yet some ppl like them. im me sometime
deathmonkey1726

yes, it really is quite nice... hope to see more from you soon.

Thanks you guys. That makes me feel a lot beter about it. I have another one but i asked some ppl about it already. they said it was good but i know its not even close to this one. maybe i'll post it. ok so thanks again!