very good poem that came straight from the heart. well done.

that was really deep AND sweet. The rhyming works extremley well in the poem. well done.
-xx-

nice one!

sad... good but sad, keep up the good work you are truely talented, even though I only asked you to check out 1 of my poems id love for you to read/vote on the rest or just the 1's in featured, you dont have to comment.