As of now 44 people have looked at this poem. I didn't write please comment at the bottom for nothing. Please comment. Thank you.
-Conner

Great poem. I think the reason your poems aren't gettin the recognition deserved is because of the irregularity of your verses. Try and make them flow better, maybe condensing some of your lines, you might find you'll get more admirers. Sorry if my honesty upsets you. It's not intentional, just the way I am.