I just wanted to say that I DO NOT do drugs, and in fact, I'm not sure why I wanted to write this. Maybe it is because I am reading "One Flew Over the Cukoo's Nest."

I'm not exactly sure I understood it. But I really loved how it was written. The last line rhymed with the other last 4 lines of the next 4 stanzas. I think theres a name for that kind of poem, but i'm not sure what it is. Excellent Job. I'm off to readmore.

Holy crap dude!!!...Thats an awesome poem. You should be really proud of that one. That's my favorite one of yours so far. I'm really impressed. Excellent write

5 thumbs up with out a doubt:)

btw...whoever voted it less than a 5 is freakin retard ;)

Hey, this is one excellent poem it took me a while to work out and even then our interpretations could be entirely different, but this is without a doubt a 5 star poem :)

Nicely done. I admit i had to read it through a few times and i'm still not overly sure if i understand it. What i was impressed with was the use of words, and the rhyme a meter was flawless (as far as i could tell). I also liked the aaab rhyme scheme you used, i thought it worked very well. And i am pleased to hear you do not take drugs ;-)
Well done, thanks for sharing.

Like some forms of art, this poem seems open to broad interpretation. But I was impressed with your use of language in this poem. The very creative words and descriptions along with the rythmic style made it a pleasure to read.

if you changed the last line on the third stanza a bit, this poem would be truly flawless. On the first line of the last stanza, i don't really understand when you made the 'faus pas' ;-), but i found the internal ryhme on the third line clever.
Aken Sol

faux*
^.^;;

faux pas is a french term that is now an english one, meaning "social blunder"

Definetly was mysterious and sometimes hard to understand (even a little strange like ya said in the forums :P) but I loved it! Awesome job!

It's real good. =)

Weird man, but purty at the same time. Tell me sometime what kind of style this is called because I like it.

Wow this is really good...very deep..i think the second stanza was my favorite too....i also loved your flow and how you were so descriptive 5/5

WOW. Im truly amazed by you.

Haha, I thought it was cute, though I'm not sure if you meant for it to be cute or not. Yet I found it to be very adorable. Anyway it flowed good, along with the rythym of it.

Wow, this was a different write. Drugs huh? Well, at least we know you can write about almost anything. The 3rd line of the 2nd stanza seemed kind of long. But other than that, it was a great write.

ALL YOUR POEM ARE GREAT
AND YOUR OWN
YOU ARE A VERY SPECIAL WRIGHTER

GREAT WORK AGAIN
LANA