That was excellent, seeping with emotion and power, in the first line you put tital but i think you mean Tidal waves. Great poem :)

I agree with Julie, I feel the revenge of wanting others to feel you pain through you poem.

lovely poem ben, great words and rhymes, and story conflict as john said. you're an amazing writer and i hope you don't actually mean it...hope to talk to you soon...love u <3 xxx
-Sarah

Great poem, i like the anger.
:) Keep writing

Great job... poweful, emotional... awesome!

Excellent job, much emotion expressed.

--Sher