Robert, your poem was pretty good..... there is suttin that i have to say though.... in the begining it soundZ lik that your dating the person but as u read on it soundZ lik ur not dating the person lik ur trying to get them baCc..... itZ just reallly confusing.... i hate to chop up ur poem... other thenthat ur poem is pretty good. God Bless...
Sammie

oh i could feel your emotion in this one so open and honest you really spilled your soul onto the page i feel with this piece well worth a five and thanks for posting it i enjoyed it very much