Comments : A way shown to death....

  • 20 years ago

    by Megha

    touching... :-)

  • Ahhh! I can see only pain... What happened to her? I am sorry what ever happened. Please take care of yourself. Who ever she is, she is making you write good poems.

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Good job. Keep it up. I am sorry that she has you feeling like that.

    Ashley

  • 20 years ago

    by Lucy

    very nice flow, you must loce someone a lot

  • 20 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Another great piece shaped out of life's realities. Keep writing man