This is really good. I especially like the metaphor of the razor blades. Nice word choice.

(and thanks for the review =)
-Erica

Wow this poem is very very good! hunnie please dont think your a bad writter cause you aint! this is so goood, really. 5/5

Great poem 5/5

Really good, loved the words u used, they captured the atmosphere
5/5

Wow... amazing poem! great imagery and graphical.. flowed very nicely and was very deep! loved it! and also great title for this poem it really stands out =)

--emotionless19.*

Wow, thats excellent,,,GREAT JOB!

Wow, that was really deep and meaninful. loved the "stolen sunbeams" and "razorblade" metaphor...an incredible peice of writing...top stuff!!

Aww. that was deep. ocean deep. i loved it. the raw emotion was powerful. love it. 6/5 ~KM~