Comments : Waiting for Darkness

  • 20 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Ohh scary...so i'll stay away from the woods at just past midnight then. I liked the feeling of insecurity in the first stanza, waiting for everything to seem all right before emerging.
    Just one grammar error i spotted, in the first stanza, on the second line you said "were" it should be "where". Well done, scary work.