by Katie McCullick Aug 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tears roll down on this cold winter day, as they dig the hole for your body to lay. |
by Patrik
I liked the poem and it's content, but should be cut in to more lines:p |
by paulina.♥
I loved this poem. It was really good. Keep writing. 5/5 |
by Hannah
great poem! I voted on some of yours ! Great job! Keep writing! |
thanks |
by Lenee.Roca
that poem touched me a lot...i agree with all of them..you have talent and i liked the way you organized your words and phrases! keep on writing im looking forward to reading more of your poems!! |