where it says hear it is supposed to be heart

That was so touching. I loved this bit, "Your spirit remains though your body's no more. It flows in my heart like waves upon the shore." So beautiful and moving. I thought it worked well how you repeated the first part too. Very well done.

that poem touched me a lot...i agree with all of them..you have talent and i liked the way you organized your words and phrases! keep on writing im looking forward to reading more of your poems!!

thanks

great poem! I voted on some of yours ! Great job! Keep writing!

I loved this poem. It was really good. Keep writing. 5/5

-Ice

I liked the poem and it's content, but should be cut in to more lines:p

Best wishes,
patrik