Comments : Suddenly.

  • 20 years ago

    by Brooklyn

    Sometimes men don't see what they are leaving behind.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Wow, nicely said. I can feel the pain, hope, and yet desperation all at once, good job.

    --Sher

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki

    the grass is never greener on the other side. He doesn't reilze what he is missing out on. The poem itself was beautiful you worded that so nicely. Its also very sad. I hope this isn't true to you :(
    btw thank you for commenting on my poem a fairys world :)

  • 20 years ago

    by alexander

    Very sad but very good keep on writing

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    awesome job wit this one, ur an awesome write, TNHX for ur comments on my poems .. ! LoL !