I like this one a lot better. It had rythem and it rhymed. Great job.

aww...that is so sweet. you are so talented and i know what you mean by this poem b/c u and i are so much alike. its ok, one day some girl is gonna be so lucky to have u!!!! i know. u r one of the nicest ppl i have ever ever talked to, ur such a beautiful person...i could go on and on but i am not. lol

guess what i just realized from my above comment---
i am the one girl who is so lucky to have you. smiles*

You are such a talented writter, I luv all your poems, this one is just..wow..amazing...I can relate and Im sure others can to, awesome job here! keep on writting okay:o)
Shannon