My Fear

Wow.. I love the way you describe things.. its the kind of poem that will stick in my head for a while... well basicly love it! 5/5
xxx

Amazing poem:o) Great description, and flows well, short but sweet. Thanks for the comment..and I finished that poem^_^ Keep on writting! 5 outta 5 here for sure
Shanney

nice poem keep on writin my azn friend
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hey matt, its heather. told ya i was gonna check out all your poems again. this is really good, i love it.

The content overall is good. I like what you are trying to say here, that you are your own fear. But I couldnt really find the rythem, I saw that it rhymed but still couldnt get a rythem. Good job overall tho.