hey, this is very good! especially since you said you don't usually write like this. And I wouldn't have known it wasn't true if you hadn't said it on the discussion board... Great work!

Its BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, very good. Sad subject matter. You did a great job on it.
~Hannah~

Wow...this is so sad, but so incredible..I'm glad you tried the challenge, because you did an amazing job! <33 xxxxxx
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

oo man..that was really good!! its soo sad thoiugh..but i liked how you worded it!! keeo it up!!