I really liked the way that you wrote this poem. It is a little different than some of the other stuff that I have seen, and I am impressed. Great poem, I liked it alot, especially about the every minute in every hour. That is a great line. Once again, great poem.

omg! this poem is so good! it s full of emotion..very touching!

Another poem beautifully written. Keep it up Kristen! 5!

Bad poetry is monotinous amd puts a bad taste in your mouth and makes you wonder why you read poetry. but good poetry makes you love. your poetry is good, and although I favor poems of colorful description, your flow is awesome.