No doubt, one of the best poems I have read on this site, or any other site in a long time. Everything about this poem was perfect. You have a skill with your writing. Not only do you have emotions just pouring out of your work, but the way you use your words is smart and intellegently done. Your work is very impressive. I could probably write about a page comment on this poem, but I will just say that it is great and keep it up.

Wow!!!! That was such a wonderful poem!! I know EXACTLY how you feel!! That was such a wonderful poem! You're SOOO talented!!!!
Amy

Excellent poem. Keep up the good work.

beauitful poem andy...i can relate as im sure many ppl can...magnificent job..keep it up xxxooxxx
-Mortalidaga
xxtakecarexx

beautiful...just beautiful...

Wow. This was so wonderful. You wrote it with such emotion and feeling. I'm sorry for what happened to you. But I'm glad you wrote your feelings out because I'm sure many people will relate to this poem and find some bit of comfort in it. Continue posting and keep your head up! =)

~Grace

Oh wow. I've seen some pretty good poems in the past year, and this one's at the top. I wrote some, but they don't even compare. I posted them if you want to read them and comment. In fact, I'd really appreciate it if you did. Thanks! :D

That was great! the way u worded everything was so correct and smbolizing! keep it up...ull go far!

Never have oi written a love poem before. But you are good. Wow....you are just an amazing writer! I really like this poem. Keep writitng, and stay strong! Luv Ya! Jamie

Wow!! Amazing poem. I know how it feels ... sadly. And I know how badly it hurts. Anways, great job. This really is a great poem.

An awesome poem. You really expressed your feelings in it and it seemed like it came form your heart. Great poem! Keep Wirting!
~xoxo~

I've felt like this too.

its a great poem and i can relate to it .great poem

great poem