by james Aug 30, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I remember that day I was walking alone |
by EpithetPoet
Very powerful and wonderfully written poem. The flow was almost perfect, really enjoyed it. |
WoW. This is a great poem and its message is timeless. people could read this in 20yrs time and it would still have the same effect and just as much meaning. Great Work. xmollyxx |
by Amy
omg..I almost started crying cuz i have lost so many ppl close to me in my life. This was such a heartbreaking and touching poem. Im sorry if you have suffered loss like this. Keep up the great work. xoxo |
by Kevin J
Not only is this a good poem, but it leaves an important "life" lesson that does'nt just apply to some, but everyone. Nice write james! |
Thats really beautiful, i love your use of raw emotion coz its a really hard topic to write about but you seem to have summed it up in a few mere verses. youve got incredible talent, keep it up. xx |