thats really good , i didnt understand the big words , but i got the whole thing , i like it alot !!!

Too much ideas were filled in the poem. Please don't think that it was a negative comment..! It's was mysterious and different. I liked it. But i would have preffered to read it as a short story than a poem... Have you ever written short stories? You have loads of imaginations.. please try it. I am eager to read the rest of your poems. keep up the good work.

Ow.

That was beautiful. Almost painfully beautiful. It might have been painful to watch me reading it. I winced in sympathy in all the revelatory places and pulled a sad expression at the very end. It was that good, you see.

This is pretty inadequate in terms of praise. Hmm.

Well done. Really.

-paperdoll

An extremely well written poem. I loved the likening of the scar to a tattoo and the contrasting emotions described of fascination, repulsion and embarrassment.

Part 1 in my opinion was the best out of your poems (which are all very good by the way)

An extremely well written poem. I loved the likening of the scar to a tattoo and the contrasting emotions described of fascination, repulsion and embarrassment.

Part 1 in my opinion was the best out of your poems (which are all very good by the way)

An extremely well written poem. I loved the likening of the scar to a tattoo and the contrasting emotions described of fascination, repulsion and embarrassment.

Part 1 in my opinion was the best out of your poems (which are all very good by the way)