Try again...

by Tineke   Aug 30, 2004


I don't know...
...If your kindness was real
...If your words for me were real
...If YOU were real

Maybe you are totally different
than you pretend to be
Maybe you don't even know
who you are, who you want to be

I was crazy about you
And you knew it
Said you were crazy about me too
too many sweet words you had for me

Well, apparently you are hypocritical
I can't understand how someone
can be like that
What did you want to achieve?

Thought it could be great with you
Yeah it was nice...for a couple of days
From one day to another everything was changed
And first I didn't se through it.

But then you still didn't answer the phone
And the evening you saw me
you didn't dare to look in my eyes
Then I knew what you wanted.

It was hard for me, I admit.
It hurts me, that I was so stupid
that I fell in love
with someone pathetic like you.

Afterwards I knew that
my friends were right
You acted stupid
you were pathetic that evening.

Now the only problem that's left is
that you still haven't give me
an answer at my question (why?)
No explanation, no word, nothing...

Don't think that I wrote this for you
Not for you, but about you
you don't deserve a girl like me
and I deserve much better than you.

You tried to bring me down
you didn't succeed
you are too weak and I am too strong
Don't expect that there will fall (more) tears for you...

... TRY AGAIN ...

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  • 20 years ago

    by jamie25

    this was good..man do i understand how you felt when you wrote this..i think we've all been there!

  • 20 years ago

    by Bryan

    Hey, I thought that was a very good poem, and I feel sorry for you that you had to deal with a guy like that. But I am 23 years old and I have only ever met one good guy (it's not me, lol) So girls are gonna have trouble in finding a pretty good guy. But about the poem. I thought it showed a lot of emotion, and it was deep. It showed anger and hurt. I thought it showed every emotion a person can have at a time like that. Great job.