Hey, I thought that was a very good poem, and I feel sorry for you that you had to deal with a guy like that. But I am 23 years old and I have only ever met one good guy (it's not me, lol) So girls are gonna have trouble in finding a pretty good guy. But about the poem. I thought it showed a lot of emotion, and it was deep. It showed anger and hurt. I thought it showed every emotion a person can have at a time like that. Great job.

this was good..man do i understand how you felt when you wrote this..i think we've all been there!