Very good. I like it, I think we all know what it feels like when everything in us has to be buried, and yes it does tend to make one feel as though they are to be burried themselves.

--Sher

This poem reminds me of One Flew Over the Cukoo's Nest, but then again, everything does recently... I was just thinking about the hearing voices, and the sort of schizophrenic/MPD thing going on. The ending was as cool as it was original. Good work.

That is exactly how i feel ....its beautiful...everythings burried n forgotten thats life

Wow really enjoyed reading this poem, it was very different and I especially liked the end!!!!!!!! well done
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Thanks for the comment on my poem

i loved the ending! cuz it lets us know more directly who u r! keep writin!

no clue what it was going to be about from the title. excellent poem! very nice rhyming and really unique how you ended it. take care:)

another sad, but excellent poem, you are so talented.

OH WOW!! beautiful work!!! LOved the ending!!! it was great!! wow!

very clever... i like it alot... especially this stanza :

My body has been broken
My mind is all but dead
Sometimes all I feel inside
Are these voices in my head

good job