by Rick Z Aug 30, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I hear the screams an distant cries |
Wow. Awesome poem! I could picture every part! Gosh, You're amazing! Keep it up doll. you're fabulous :) |
by Timothy
I did not read this before I submitted my poem "Opaque", but it is very similar to your's. I liked the part about payment of sin. |