Comments : No One Know's *Part One*

  • 20 years ago

    by Kelsey

    wow! thats good..and I read all the poem its rude not to cuz then u dont get the whole thing! ur like me I write everything i feel,or about a person! good job luv always-Kels

  • 20 years ago

    by Hannah M.

    I liked this one. It is good that you were able to get your feeling about what happened out. It is better than keeping them locked up inside of you. I am sorry this happened. Keep up the writing.
    ~Hannah~

  • 20 years ago

    by kRyStA_+

    aww im really sorry that happened to you. your a good writer and its better to get out ur feelings then keep them locked inside cuz it will only make things worse! you know. Good job. luv-krysta. keep up ur great writing..

  • 20 years ago

    by Just Ariel

    meggie............oh.................um........who.............what...........uh............which bro did this 2 u........

  • 20 years ago

    by don mohr

    You are one hell of a brave young
    lady. Be careful whom you share
    your thoughts with, and please, dont
    ever feel you take up space wherever
    you go. Thats like saying your not
    worth anything, and seeing the reaction
    with this letter(poem)-you ARE important and worth waiting for, that
    special someone who can bring it all
    together.(like Humpty Dumpty!)-know
    what i mean?...but that was a boy.

  • 20 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    nice poem....u write real good stuff...i wish i could let go off my pain the way ou do...i never can manage to vent up my feelings...i am ver sorry abt u...like don said be proud of being who u are....its' easier to face life then
    Bye Take Care....Ani