by My Obsεssion Aug 31, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You are the lightning |
ok, I get what you are saying about the mask... the mask I was seeing is a little one like the lone ranger wears... LOL :o) great poem, Still!!! |
No actually (at least the way I was thinking of it). There face is mostly white with the black around their eyes, nose and on their ears, giving the illusion that they're wearing a white mask (at least to me). Their bodies seem to be more white than black though so maybe I'll have to reword a little to try and clear things up there... |
by Gracie Jo
Wonderful job here. I enjoyed reading it a lot... keep up the good work! =) Take Care! |
WOW! this is awesome! I really do like the reversal of thought you utilize in this. VERY well done! |
Thanks a lot everyone. I will try to work on the rythm like you all said. :) |