by Mark Spencer Aug 31, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
A Tale From The Dark Side |
Slightly creepy, its like a i dont know. i like hte da dun da dun da da da da da dun.. thats how i interpret the flow or w/e. i like how the 3rd line double rhymes, but it makes the poem less scary. but a wicked awesome tale and poem. |
Ooo, scary! very good and immaginative! it sort of reminds me of a twilight zone I saw and Jeepers Kreepers2. i love it. 5/5 |
by Emily
OMG! I like that a lot! |
by Danielle
sweet poem |
by Amy
I really liked the style you wrote this in and it was pretty intersting story. Great work |