really good job ben...if your on..go in th chat please :( i love you xxooxx
-Mortalidaga
xxxtakecarexxx

wow, that was very unusual, if u are who u say u are, i hope ur having a good time, and that poem wasnt wriitin about u, but oh well, i wrote it bcuz of the colour of the sky, as it was a rainy day, and im over you, if you are who u say u are, anyway, howd u find it?? meh, l8az.
Ben

beautiful work ben. this poem reminds me of one of my favourite songs for some reason but anyways, excellently written and it flows so well.
xnikkix

i just realised the whole reason it reminds me of that song is because whenever i listen to it i feel like i'm the girl thats being sung about and i feel like i'm inside the song, and your poem made me feel that exact same way, like i was that girl, and i could feel everything happening.
xnikkix
oh and the song is `strawberry gashes` by jack off jill in case you were wondering...

i dont get it... i mean i kno its about a girl killin herself but y? i didnt get it.. i kno you tried to say it but i didnt get it... sry im slo..

i was walking to school one day, i was in a realli depressed mood, n it was storming, the whole sky was grey, n 4 some reason, it made me think of how some ones eyes must look as they die, so i made up a slight story, but put the girl in place of me to make it seem surreal, i hope thats better...
Ben

geez, ur in a bad mood arent you, phaps if u stoped being such a b!!ch then u might actually realise even if it was a bad poem (which most people this it wasnt) even if it was a bad poem, it wouldnt matter, because it came from the heart, so instead of trying to make people feel bad, just dont say anything, now get a f'ing life and p!ss off. oh, and umm, just to let u know, it wasnt about my x gf, so u are wrong there.
best of luck in the future
Ben

Oh yeah, juliette, our one pussy cat. If you have nothing better to do then to come here and say shit about Ben's poem because your PMS'ing then that shows who is truly better, eh? (Incase you are too stupid to know, I'm saying Ben is better) Ben's poetry is sooooo much better than anything you could ever dream of writing. He's creative, smart, charming, enchatning, and nice. From your comment, it seems you are none of those. I hope you rot in the depths Heck.
-Mort
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