Lol...that was tight. It's nice to know you're not "most girls!" ;)

Thanx 4 that comment by the way

Mad-Love

Kev

I really love the twist in this poem, It comes in so unexpectedly in a well thoughtout manner.

very well written, lovely poem.

Wow I loved this poem! =) Keep it up and thanks for the comments on my poems! ;)

~Grace

hey gurl i love this poem ...iloved it's tone...very unique..keep writing...oh and did mention i really appreciate ur comments on my poems??;)

it's me again:) i've written a new poem..it's called 'catharsis' check it out if u can...thanx! ur a peach:)

This poem is tight girl. I feel you on that, cuz I dont want a man that can't love me and only me. You got talented, keep it up! Much Love * LiL One

Ok first of all.. you didn't have to hav an attitude about it! second ..YOU KNOW you are feeling me!

Seriously now
I loved the way the poem builds up to a tell-you-off-ending.
I love the message. People have to have faith in themselves, and this message clarifies that.

Nice poem. It good to see some with varieties in their poems.

btw.. I like most girls.. =p
Fix the type there're to they're

lol- thanks david 4 da comments. yeah i'm feeling u but u need 2 change ur ways. and thanks for pointing out my mistake, i've changed it. xmollyxx

I wish more women would think like this!!! I also agree w/ what David Velazquez wrote about the building up. Great Job again.

Haha, really good poem. Loved it, well done!

"stick it where the sun dont shine" lol. again a great poem. u just got added to my favorite list. BTW, no my team dont know that i write, but it wouldn't matter if they did.

Hahaha, I was laughing at the end :D sorry if it wasn't meant to be funny but yeah, it was great, its good to know you're not like most girls :D Keep up the good writing Molly, I love your work :) Take care.