LIVING MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU

by jamie25   Aug 31, 2004


The sun has started rising, its almost here,
but i can't see the beauty through
these tears,
just a brand new day to struggle
through,
Living my life without you

The birds have begun to sing
their lovely songs
but they're so different since
you've been gone so long,
their songs have turned so
blue
living my life without you

The moon came out tonight and
showed its face bared a frown,
i send up wishes to the stars
but they just fall back down
the stars don't shine as bright
as they used to,
Living my life without you

The way you kiss, the way you touch,
its like my life alone isn't worth that
much,
you were all i ever knew
so how do i get through
Living my life without you?

*This isn't one of my best poems but let me know what you think anyway!

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki

    I thought it was really great. I like how you send up wishes but they come falling down, and the stars arn't as bright as they use to be. I think thats my favorite part in your poem. Great Job and thank you for commenting on my poem :)