Nice poem.If u ask me,i guess ur in love....

This poem is very beautiful b'coz it said what ur heart and mind thinks and wants.Don't let my Gf to know that u want to Borrow me otherwise she will be very mad at u!!!Just Kidding...
Keep writing... and take care....

This poem is really nice, I like how you wrote it and it has a lot of emotion in it...I think its real...LiL One

Damn i've been looking for a poem like this! Keep up your writing

amazing. i like it. great job.