that is so cute, I can totally relate to that poem so Im giving it a 5.. nice job.. i loved it

Interesting rhymes. Shyness will fade with experience.

small tips: "soar" and "infinity"

Cute poem.. Hahaha.. Even though I hate to admit, I can relate to this poem.. I'm very shy in admitting my feelings.. And thats why I write.. ^^

Awesome poem kevin, you did a great job. Wondrous rhymes, but yes the spelling mistakes that Brian pointed out. It was wodnerfully writteneed, i liked your patteren. I viewed your picture in your profile, and like Lucifer said, you have nothing to be shy about. Best of luck <3
-Mortalidaga
xxxxTakeCareAlwaysxxxx

Thanx 4 the comments and corrections everyone. Much appreciated!. I fixed soar, but infinite was spelled that way on purpose. It fits into the rhyming scheme..a little poetic liscense:p

btw..I see my shyness ass an asset. It attracts the right kind of attention;)

This is so sweet!:p just cant get enough of the poems you write keep on writting some i love them you really got a talent mine kinda sucks..lol but ...lol